Our Weather Poems
With Miss Turner at writing time we made some weather poems.
using similes and metaphors.
Here are three that we think stood out.
First is Luca's
Thunder
The sound of thunder is a
Greek gods shouting.
The lightning is a Greek god's
weapon.
The raining is the
god's crying.
Next is Lila's
One drop of rain
Rain are nerds falling from the sky.
Rain is like waterfall dribbling from
god.
It's tears of joy dropping down.
like gods tears.
Last but not least Lilly's
lightning
Striking light aiming for me.
trying to kill me I run for my life.
only finding it booming behind me.
racing behind me. I see lightning
making me cry.
This is very inspirational writing. Can you please come and read some to our class? We love sharing learning. Miss Turner must be doing amazing things with you.
ReplyDeleteI like all of your stories of the weather. It is a example of a amazing story!!
ReplyDeleteI love how you told what you thought it was.
ReplyDeleteGood photo choices :)
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