Tuesday 28 June 2016

                                                                       Bubbles

I hear pop! What is is that sound?  I am in a slippery container. I wobble upside down.Someone has taken me. I'm out, soaring around. Pop, pop, pop, pop! What is that sound?


It's my turn to shine. Blop...It's go time. Once and for all.       

 By Kaja.
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4 comments:

  1. Anonymous28 June 2016 at 14:07

    nice story Kaja it nice sharing our storys

    mikayla

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  2. Caryn Magrath29 June 2016 at 08:30

    Hi I like your bubble story

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  3. Taine29 June 2016 at 08:40

    I really like it because it has some nice onomatopoeia.

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  4. Eunice26 August 2016 at 08:32

    great writing. I like when you write I wobble upside down

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