Thursday 7 July 2016

jackiwa wa wa wa

                                                                    

                                                           Beach

                                                  Glistening sand 

                                                 Waves crashing in

                                       Glistening waves crashing in

                                             Fire rises, lowers, stays 

                                                  The fire dances 

                                               Sandflies  swarm   

                                                        Sand



                                                   by Kade 

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8 comments:

  1. Anonymous7 July 2016 at 10:13

    ygyg

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  2. lilly mckinnon8 July 2016 at 10:15

    you do awsome writing..... i want to write just like you.........

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  3. Anonymous27 July 2016 at 14:15

    your amazing dfgyfjjfhjhdjkhfisudwugdfervehjfdjcvrfbrhfhj sorry about that i sat on the computer

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  4. Anonymous27 July 2016 at 14:15

    your amazing dfgyfjjfhjhdjkhfisudwugdfervehjfdjcvrfbrhfhj sorry about that i sat on the computer

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  5. Unknown18 August 2016 at 16:25

    I like your poem, Kade!

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  6. Kade25 August 2016 at 18:40

    Thanks for the nice comments

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  7. Unknown8 March 2017 at 20:16

    Hi there everyone.
    I just happened to come across this great 'jackiwa' poem written last year by Kade. I was really excited to see children around the country are enjoying writing a poem I created. I'm writing a jackiwa poem for Easter, and also have one for autumn. I love writing for kids, and seeing you enjoying writing excites me. If you want to know why I called them jackiwas, you'll have to email me and ask hahaha. Keep on writing.

    Judi B (Billcliff)

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    1. Kade21 April 2017 at 06:56

      hi Judi thanks a lot, I loved the jackiwa poems there fun to do

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