Thursday 7 July 2016

Summer

Picking flowers

Cart-wheels and hand-stands.

Sun-glasses save my sight.

Sandles imprison my feet.

Sweat drips off.

Keeping cool

FUN

By Addison

6 comments:

  1. A great pice of writing Addison. I hope you put more of your writing on the blog, I really like how you chose the colours for your words very carefully.

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  2. Great work! I like your chose of colors for each word I bet you thought!$$$


    From Carys

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  3. great story Addi you used lots of great sentences.
    from Mikayla

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  4. wow! i bet you'd like doing onother one addi

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  5. great Jakiwa!!

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  6. great writing Addi. I like you write about summer and, what you can do at summer outside

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